Wednesday, 25 May 2016

Water Gun Catastrophe!


Stomping coming from inside as the noise gets louder and louder I realise what is about to happen ..I jump inside the garage behind my brothers bike ,fred staring at me like I’m a lunatic but staying right where he is with his water gun completely unaware of what is about to happen.”FRED WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY WINDOWS …I’VE JUST CLEANED THEM!!!” Mum shouts furiously ”but..but.. But...I..uhhhh…” “NO! GO TO YOUR ROOM!” .As I see Fred walk off with his head down … I feel a glimmer of guiltiness rush through my body as if I had broken a child’s toy ….pfft As if!

1 comment:

  1. Well done setting the brother up without telling the reader what is going to happen.

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